kite

last night I dreamt he was my kite

and I was holding on to fine

but he wants to drift toward the night

so now I cannot not grasp the line

I held it strong, would have given my life

but I feel the pull; it wasn’t mine

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One thought on “kite

  1. I like the concept here. I think you could tighten this nicely into a great little metaphor. The image is strong and works beyond what is being said.

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