total

is it in the sum?

if so, is it minus or plus?

and if it’s plus,

where do you end?

where do you rest?

and after how long?

and how do you know it’s correct?

how can it be in the sum?

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  1. I love this structure and idea. Strangely enough, I am writing a couple of poems (un-blogged) that utilise the concept of an equation as a way of exploring other ideas. Using the framework of an equation as a way of looking at life, or at least a way in which people look back on experience.

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